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sosenka_va, July 23rd, 2009, 12:34 pm


Chop chop, sweet Charlotte
Chop chop till he's dead
Chop chop, sweet Charlotte
Chop off his hand and head.

"Hush...Hush, Sweet Charlotte" (1964)

And the first chapter begins!

You've probably noticed that both, the banner and layout, have changed but that's not all! Check out the new sections! <3

Edit: I finally got around changing this page. Huge thanks to GwenHazel and my dear Kutef for reminding me to do so c:


@Plagueddy: Ahahaha Is it just me or your comment sounds like a nursery rhyme? XDD Thanks a lot! :D

@ejcoletta: Thanks x3

@emruki: <3 :D

@Go Devil Daisuke: Aw crap, I actually took a look at that manga right now, I had no idea D: You see I got a green light from a friend to copy her sketch, since I liked it a lot. Now I see why she didn't want any credit. I'll change it as soon as I'll find some time. D:

@StellaCadente: Grazie, sono felice che lo gradite <3 Doskonale mowisz po polsku, znacznie lepiej niz ja po wlosku :'D

@KemikalQueen: First time I made anyone fap! XDDDDDD Thanks a lot :'DDDD

@Oxygentank: I'm happy you do x3

@Sebellxx: Argh I envy you, I only have a really crappy copy on an old video cassette D':

@HABE: HA! Thank you X3

@Qwchestr: Aww THANK YOU <3 XDDD

@pan-ic-button: Thanks x3 Those stats will be raveled with time, hopefully somewhere soon >^>'

@Dezy: Actually I got my idea from an urban legend going on about a guy and a little girl. I just recently got to know that there's also a copypasta version about elderly people X'D

@Cheese-Sama: Thank you :D I'm so happy everyone likes it cause there were like different 8 versions and I couldn't decide X'D

@iMimi: <3 <3 <3 thank you >3<

@fishuu: Thank you sooo much <3 I'm really happy you like the layout, it actually took me longer than the page itself orz'''

@Pupa: This is probably the nicest comment I ever got ;^; THANK YOU <3

@hiruda: Thank you '///3///'

@Kyrinn: D-don't cry! ;A; I'm not really that good >A<

@CanIEatYourBrain: Thank you <3

@[MISA]: That sound painful D:

@KrysYuki: I hope so too XD Thank you! : D

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Reader Comments:


I like the new banner very much, yes yes? And your art is so beautiful. The new layout has a more gawficc feel. No gripes here! Keep up the good work.

posted by Plagueddy on July 23rd, 2009, 12:51 pm


I love your artwork and your character design. But my favorite thing about this comic is the premise. I'm sucked in.

And I love the character's page!!

posted by ejcoletta on July 23rd, 2009, 12:54 pm


Why yes, I like everything so far~

The character section is adorable. xDDD Love the chibis!

THISPAGEISEPIC. Sorry, thought I'd just let you know. :]

posted by emruki on July 23rd, 2009, 1:07 pm


I have to say this is one of my favorite comics on SJ to date. Your work is gorgeous! o w o I Like this illustration a lot too, it reminds me of one of the chapter pictures from the manga GOTH(which is a good thing).

Anyway, please keep up the amazing work! > w <

posted by Go Devil Daisuke on July 23rd, 2009, 1:25 pm


Musze to powiedziec! Wspaniale rysujesz! Ten komiks jest po prostu przesliczny. (wiem ze pisze nieskladnie ale po polsku jakos ciezko mi to wychodzi) nie moge sie doczekac na wiecej :D Ciekawa czego to on nie powinien pamietac i co mu sie porobilo z oczami O.o

posted by StellaCadente on July 23rd, 2009, 3:13 pm



posted by KemikalQueen on July 23rd, 2009, 4:56 pm


i love everything!

posted by Oxygentank on July 23rd, 2009, 6:26 pm

  Very nice.

I have that movie saved on my dvr. I can't wait to watch it. Your work on this, so far, is amazing. I can't wait to read more.

posted by sebellxx (Guest) on July 23rd, 2009, 8:47 pm


You're spoiling us with great designs. The character page is pretty clever too.

posted by HABE on July 23rd, 2009, 9:34 pm


WOW! Super cool layout, super cool characters page, and super cool chapter cover! ;____; <3!!!

This is just all so...SUPER COOL :D

posted by Qwchestr on July 23rd, 2009, 10:20 pm


I love the new banner and layout! And the chapter cover is just GAWHHHJJJJEUSSSS! Lars' scar is teh sexy. Lapis is so adorable as a chibi! GAH! He looks so happy! HAHA!

I liked how you blocked out the character stats (?) it seems even more mysterious!

posted by pan-ic-button on July 24th, 2009, 12:08 am


Ooh, very pretty art so far! One thing though;; is the opening based on a creepypasta story? Because the premise is basically the same. Just wondering! Very intrigued as to where you're going with this.

posted by Dezy (Guest) on July 24th, 2009, 12:47 am


The new layout is so awesome, yay! :D

posted by Cheese-Sama on July 24th, 2009, 12:41 pm


This looks awesome so far! Your inking and coloring are both gorgeous. I'm in love with Lapis *g* I can't wait to see where the story goes! :)

PS - And I'm totally loving the layout <3

posted by fishuu on July 25th, 2009, 5:02 pm


i can't tell you <3 just how much i love this <3 it's so professional <3 and i love the layout <3 and your style is so fabulour <3 i just can't <3 <3 <3 it enough :D more more more

posted by Pupa on July 27th, 2009, 6:26 pm


holy crap this is amazing DD8 im soo curious about whats going to happen sdjflsd

posted by hiruda on July 29th, 2009, 11:36 am


Your art is so beautiful it makes me cry. Someday, I want to be able to draw half as well as you do...

And the shading is so gorgeous~ And the story looks interesting~~
*cries* <--in a good way

posted by Kyrinn on July 29th, 2009, 12:01 pm


(stabs pen into organs)

posted by [M I S A] on July 29th, 2009, 9:47 pm


Your art is wonderful! I adore the way you lay out everything. The environment is so beautiful and the way you design each page really draws in the person and sets a certain mood. The story's idea so far is really interesting. I hope you take this far.

posted by KrysYuki on November 4th, 2009, 12:33 am


Read the first few pages, and I'm already hooked into this story! I love the clean crisp look of the pages, really perfect!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

posted by TheGrief on February 13th, 2010, 4:20 pm

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